Story Update: Forging the Blade, Kithe and Kin, Chapter 6, 1/3

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      Forging the Blade, Part II - Kithe and Kin
      by MacGeorge
      
      Rating, PG-13
      
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      GENTLE READERS:  Late, late last night (actually early this
      morning) I drafted three emails for re-reading and sending
      today, when I had an opportunity to more cogently review
      them.  I *swear* I didn't hit "send" on any of them, I just
      hit "save", as in "save draft of...". Then I immediately
      shut the computer down and went to bed.  That will teach me
      to do *anything* on a computer when I am semi-conscious.
      Evidently, the third of three parts went out last night and
      for that I apologize all over the place for confusing the
      heck out of everyone.
      
      Anyway, here are the other two parts, again with my
      apologies.
      
      The html version of the story can be found at:
      
      http://www.wordsmiths.net/MacGeorge/Boardwalk/kithe/kithe6.html
      
      MacGeorge
      
      See disclaimers and acknowledgments in previously posted
      Part 0.
      
      
      Chapter 6
      
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      Being confined in a small space on board ship was a fact of
      life, and one to which Connor had long become accustomed.
      And living in close quarters with his kinsman and student
      was also something that had become part and parcel of
      everyday life.  But confined in close quarters with a
      sexually frustrated man being actively pursued by an equally
      frustrated and sexually potent young woman was enough to
      drive any sane man to the brink.  It was almost as
      irritating as being pursued by Brigitte himself.
      
      "How about I just sleep below decks with the crew, and you
      and Brigitte use our cabin," Connor groused, already knowing
      what Duncan's answer would be.  He was tempted to mouth the
      words along with his student.
      
      "Och, No, Connor!" Duncan responded predictably with a look
      of affronted honor.  "Not with the lass' father only a few
      feet away.  And she is wanting marriage, not just a quick
      ride between the sheets."  Duncan paced the two strides it
      took to get from one side of their cabin to the other.  "And
      how could you tell her that I was looking for a bride?  You
      know that's not true, you bastard!"
      
      Connor was sitting on his narrow bunk, slicing and eating a
      slightly shriveled apple with his dirk.  "I'm really sorry
      about that.  Must've been Seamus' grog.  Didn't know what I
      was saying."  He didn't meet his student's dubious look,
      concentrating diligently on the perfection of his cut of
      apple.
      
      Duncan narrowed his eyes at his teacher.  "I don't recall
      you drinking that much grog, Connor MacLeod."
      
      Connor chuckled.  "I'm surprised you recall anything at
      all.  You were passed out or puking for most of the next
      day."  He glanced up, and almost chuckled again when his
      clansman's complexion faded to distinctly odd shade at the
      memory of the aftereffects of Seamus' poisonous brew.
      Fortunately for everyone, Seamus and Duncan had consumed the
      last of the stuff that first night, or Seamus might not have
      survived the trip.  "I, however, am old enough that no
      amount of grog actually makes me sick," he lied smoothly.
      
      Duncan made a dubious noise and gave him a baleful look, so
      Connor concentrated on the last of his apple.  His student
      was naive about some aspects of life, but he was not
      stupid.  It was best not to push his credibility too far.
      
      ~~~~~~~
      
      The city of Genoa was a riot of color and odor and movement,
      warmed and ripened by gentle Mediterranean breezes that had
      the crew and passengers of the Brigitte stripping off layers
      of clothing.  Even so, the Genovese were well wrapped
      against what, for them, was a crisp winter chill.  Connor
      carried his cloak over his arm, but Duncan had gone so far
      as to pack his away in the trunks the crew was loading onto
      carts to be hauled to a nearby inn.
      
      Normally, Duncan would have been happily chattering about
      all the new sights and sounds of the colorful city, but the
      lad was still brooding over his difficult departure from
      Brigitte, who had been left sobbing in their cabin,
      convinced she would never love again.  Connor felt a twinge
      of guilt at his own less-than-honorable role in her misery
      but firmly shoved the thought away.  If it hadn't been
      Duncan who had been forced to let her down, then he would
      have had to do the deed himself, and he had far less ease
      and flair with the ladies than did his handsome kinsman.
      Brigitte was much better off suffering the gentle refusal of
      Duncan MacLeod than the rude, brusque and ill-considered
      dumping that Connor would have inflicted on her.  Connor
      just hoped he lived long enough to have some of Duncan's
      finesse with the fairer sex rub off on his all-too-dense
      teacher.
      
      But Duncan couldn't stay introspective for too long with the
      whitewashed buildings of the large port city gleaming in the
      Mediterranean sun, and soon his head began to saw back and
      forth as he tried to take in everything at once.  By the end
      of the half hour trek to their hotel, Duncan was peppering
      him with questions and practicing his broad smile and a
      friendly "Buon Giorno!" with every passerby.
      
      Connor was just glad to be back in what he now considered
      'real' civilization, and as the innkeeper suspiciously eyed
      their kilts, he realized they would have to dress the part
      of young Continental gentlemen in order to blend into the
      crowds.  That wasn't such a problem for him, as he still had
      some appropriate clothing, but getting his student to wear
      European fashions might prove to be a challenge.
      
      "What's wrong with my kilt?" Duncan insisted when Connor
      broached the topic at dinner.  "It's relatively clean, it's
      in good repair, and it is so warm here, why would anyone
      want to wear britches?  It's not healthy to constrict the
      blood flow to certain parts of your body, you know, Connor,"
      he added with a wink to his teacher.
      
      "You've worn britches before, Duncan," Connor sighed.  "It
      is just so you will blend in more easily.  No Immortal wants
      to stand out in a crowd, and you do enough of that without
      scaring half of the countryside into thinking they are about
      to be attacked by a godless Northern Barbarian."
      
      Duncan's eyes were twinkling as he eyed his teacher.  "I'm
      nay godless, Connor, and well you know it.  Besides,
      methinks yon signorinas might be pleased to be attacked by a
      Northern Barbarian, godless or not."  Connor turned to find
      a cluster of women standing at the edge of the outdoor
      eating area, fluttering their fans and whispering together
      as they eyed the two unusually attired Scots.
      
      "They're just laughing at your hairy legs, cousin," Connor
      smirked.
      
      "I'll have you know many a lass has told me I have strong,
      fine legs, Connor MacLeod.  Or maybe you should ask one of
      them," he nodded again at the small crowd of daringly
      dressed admirers.
      
      "I'd be careful of asking them anything, Duncan, since
      they're no doubt more interested in your purse than your
      legs.  And I mean your coin purse, kinsman, not the other
      one."
      
      Duncan looked shocked.  "Nay.  They're not!"  Then he looked
      more closely at the 'girls', several of whom waved at him
      and cocked their hips suggestively.  "Well," he sighed with
      a twist of his mouth, "at least here they're a little
      prettier than the ones in Edinburgh."  Then a look of panic
      flashed across his face and he ducked his head, finding
      sudden fascination in his stew.
      
      "Oh?" Connor asked, and put down his spoon with a clatter.
      "And exactly what do you know of Edinburgh whorehouses,
      Duncan MacLeod?"
      
      "Mmm," Duncan mumbled around a large mouthful of food, and
      shook his head and shrugged his shoulders all at the same
      time.
      
      Connor just put an elbow on the table and leaned against his
      hand, and waited.  Duncan dared glance up once, but returned
      his eyes immediately to his bowl, spooning food quickly into
      his mouth to keep it full.  But Connor just kept waiting,
      and finally Duncan was scraping the bottom of his bowl.
      
      "Well," Duncan cleared his throat, and took a drink of his
      wine, finishing it off in several long gulps.  "That was
      pretty good, aye?" he smiled, but it faltered a little when
      all he got was a hard glare in return.  Connor had been
      perfecting the art of the glare for a good long while.
      
      "Duncan?" Connor again asked softly.
      
      Duncan cleared his throat again, shifted in his seat a
      little and frowned, his eyes wandering anywhere but to his
      teacher's face.  "Well, I'm a grown man, Connor.  You ha' no
      call to treat me like some lad wet behind the ears."
      
      "Then don't act like one.  I asked you a simple question.
      What do you know of Edinburgh whorehouses?"
      
      Duncan shrugged.  "Well, you spent a lot of time at the
      bankers and the tailors and writing letters and such,
      and...and haring off to Huntly's estate," Duncan waved his
      arm dramatically.  "You didn't expect me to just stay in
      that tiny room, did you?  After all, Connor it had been ..."
      
      "I couldn't have left you alone for but a day, cousin.  You
      must've gone looking for them.  Lord a' mercy, I thought you
      got enough women for free without having to visit a
      whorehouse.  Do you know how dangerous that is?  Many of
      them are as like to slit your throat as bed ye!" Connor
      heard his voice rise, and he glanced around to see if they
      were drawing attention, but it was a wasted effort.  Duncan
      always drew attention.
      
      "I'm no' a virgin, Connor," Duncan whispered loudly.  "And
      your friend Jamie knew the best places to go.  It was really
      quite fine, like nothing I'd ever seen.  I'd have told you
      before but Jamie said..."
      
      "Jamie Graham took you to a whorehouse?" Connor again raised
      his voice, finally giving up on any attempt at discretion.
      "That bastard!  And him a married man, although I suppose
      among the nobility that's as makes no difference, but I
      thought he had a wee bit more sense."
      
      "Jamie's a fine lad!" Duncan vehemently defended the young
      Earl of Montrose.  "And he said as I was a friend of yours,
      he would show me the best of Edinburgh.  And so he did,"
      Duncan finished with a determined smile.  "I don't think
      I've ever had so many, uh, adventures in one evening. And,"
      Duncan added, leaning closer and with a definite leer in his
      eye, "The ladies seemed quite impressed with my stamina."
      
      "Listen to me, Duncan MacLeod," Connor leaned close.
      "Whorehouses are notorious hangouts for thieves, brigands
      and...Immortals.  You weren't to go wandering about the city
      without me.  You disobeyed me, and could have easily gotten
      robbed, killed or worse!"
      
      "And you listen to me, Connor," Duncan whispered back
      harshly.  "I'm no' a child to be protected from all the
      evils of the world."
      
      "No, you're my student, which means you are supposed to be
      learning from my experience and following my instructions,
      not wandering off with a young scamp like Jamie Graham and
      whoring all night!"
      
      "You're just jealous because he didn't take you instead.
      Well, you were too busy off hobnobbing and making deals with
      the bloody Earl of Huntly to think about enjoying life a
      little."
      
      "It's those deals that keep us both clothed and fed, Duncan
      MacLeod.  Perhaps if you bothered to think about anything
      more serious than your next fuck, you might not have to rely
      on others."  Oops.  Once again Connor knew he had
      overstepped, trampling Duncan's prickly sense of honor and
      pride.  Or had he?  He had just caught a glimpse of a small,
      triumphant glimmer in Duncan's eyes, and realized the
      subject had been shifted far from its original topic.
      
      "Well, Connor," Duncan rose to his full height, in what
      Connor was beginning to suspect was a masterful display of
      deliberately conjured insult, "If that's how you feel,
      perhaps I should learn to find my own way!"  He swirled and
      strode out of the tavern in nothing less than a high
      dudgeon.
      
      "Well, I'll be," Connor smiled to himself, picking up his
      spoon to finish his meal.
      
      He took his time, savoring the plain but filling seafood
      stew and the mediocre wine that was still a vast improvement
      over shipboard fare.  He paid the bill and wandered out into
      the open piazza, where the setting sun was casting long
      shadows from the multi-story buildings.  He stretched out
      his senses, followed his instincts and found his student
      just off the square, watching some old men play bocce,
      trying with gestures and his few phrases in Italian to learn
      the rules.
      
      Duncan glanced in Connor's direction, then turned
      expectantly as Connor casually strolled closer.
      
      "So, found a trade yet?" Connor asked, crossing his arms and
      watching the bocce game with feigned interest.
      
      Duncan's eyes widened a little in surprise, but then quickly
      narrowed and he turned away, mimicking Connor's own stance
      as they watched the subtle game of strategy and control.  "I
      could become a bodyguard to a rich nobleman," Duncan
      announced.
      
      "Really?" Connor asked.  "You have no experience, no
      contacts, and what Italian nobleman would hire a Northern
      barbarian dressed in a skirt?"
      
      "A skirt!?  And you call yourself a Scot!" Duncan huffed.
      
      They stood in companionable silence for a few minutes until
      the light faded too much for the game to continue, then they
      wandered away, back towards the inn.  "That was pretty good,
      Duncan," Connor finally broke the silence.  "For a few
      seconds there, you almost had me apologizing again."
      
      Duncan's slowly materializing grin was unrepentant.  "I did,
      didn't I?"
      
      For that Connor cuffed his student hard on the shoulder,
      sending him stumbling away.  "And the next time you decide
      to go whoring, Duncan MacLeod of the Clan MacLeod, you'd
      better take me with you!"
      
      "Nay," he laughed, ducking a second cuff from his teacher,
      then reaching out to drape an arm around Connor's
      shoulders.  "You'd scare off all the pretty women!"
      
      ~~~~~~~
      
      Over the next several days, Connor got them to a clothier to
      purchase some simple attire that was suitable for travel,
      and found a coach to take them east to Ravenna.  He would
      wait to purchase horses there, since he knew the tradesmen
      better in that area.  But while Connor had not mentioned
      Duncan's disobedient behavior in Edinburgh again, he had
      nonetheless come to the conclusion that he needed to loosen
      the tight rein he had held on Duncan over the past three
      years.
      
      The man was beginning to chafe at the restrictions, and
      probably rightly so.  Duncan truly was a grown man, despite
      his relative infancy as an Immortal.  It was far from easy,
      however, to watch the lad disappear into a crowd of
      strangers in his new soft brown breeches and coat, his large
      claymore slung at his side, off to just wander the city or
      perform some errand.  Duncan was picking up Italian
      remarkably quickly and within days had begun to grow a small
      mustache, similar to what other well-dressed young men were
      wearing, and was talking to shopkeepers and flirting with
      anything in skirts.  Connor feared the lad's open heart and
      trusting attitude would surely get him into serious trouble,
      but perhaps experience was the only real teacher of life's
      hardest lessons.  Even as Connor forced himself to give
      Duncan more freedom, however, he emphasized to his student
      that he expected that what rules he did establish were to be
      strictly followed.  From the beginning, Duncan had been
      independent minded and strong-willed, but now that they were
      out in the world, he had to understand its very real
      dangers.
      
      Connor felt the wash of Immortal presence from across the
      cobblestone street, and headed towards the tavern he and
      Duncan had frequented during their week in Genoa, but as he
      stepped into the tavern's shadowed interior, a frisson of
      unease crawled across his shoulders.  The Immortal presence
      he was feeling was amplified and disconcerting and he
      automatically put his hand on his katana, scanning the room
      for threats.
      
      He spotted Duncan, who grinned and waved him over to a table
      where several people were ensconced, but then Duncan's
      outgoing ways frequently drew a crowd.  When Connor frowned
      at him meaningfully, Duncan just waved again, that cocky
      grin of his broadening even wider.  Connor carefully
      examined each face as he approached, finally settling on one
      that seemed a little more knowing, a little more wary than
      the rest.
      
      ~~~~~
      
      cont. in Chapter 6, part 2.
      
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