FICTION: MERCILESS 3/8

      Bridget Mintz Testa (btesta@HOUSTON.RR.COM)
      Wed, 3 Jul 2002 08:53:55 -0500

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      Merciless Chapter 3/8: No Exit
      
      Vi Moreau and Suzanne Herring
      Write the authors c/o Bridget Mintz Testa, btesta@houston.rr.com
      RATING: PG-15 for language and one sexually-suggestive scene
      
      The first thing Duncan MacLeod saw when he jogged slowly through the
      door of the barge, cooling down after his ten-mile run through Paris,
      was the angry red blinking message light of his phone. Leaving the
      door open behind him, and not bothering to turn on the light, he
      stepped over to the phone. In the instant of reaching out to touch
      the message button, the thrum of another Immortal presence shot
      through his skull. He whirled for his katana as somebody ran through
      the open barge door, spraying the cabin with bullets.
      
      Bullets have no individuality as they penetrate flesh and shatter
      bone -- Duncan's whole body seemed to explode as giant fists drove
      him to the deck. Grunting in pain, slipping and sliding in his own
      blood, he tried to roll out of the way of this Immortal and his gun,
      but the bullets kept coming and those giant fists struck Duncan
      again, again.
      
      Then, blessedly, there was a pause, though the gunman was still
      holding the trigger. The striker pin clicked hollowly   his Immortal
      enemy must have run out of rounds.
      
      Not at all healed, Duncan rolled and slithered towards his katana, on
      *this* side of the bed, thank God, praying for healing to come now
      and hurry.  Playing for time, his voice ragged with pain, he cried
      out, "Who are you?!  This isn't the way --"
      
      "--It's done," came a familiar voice -- a voice that was normally a
      pleasant tenor but that now rasped harshly with rage.
      
      "Stephen!" Duncan gasped.
      
      "Yes, and I don't give a damn how it's done, MacLeod, how the fucking
      Game is played. All I care about is making you pay for my father!"  A
      long sob followed, then metallic snicks that told Duncan that Stephen
      was replacing the used clip with a new one.  "Remember how you used
      to tell me the best way for a mortal to defend himself from an
      Immortal?  Shoot him dead, then run?  Well, I'm changing that a
      little -- I'm going to shoot you dead, then cut off your head with
      your own katana."
      
      Stephen's rant had given Duncan a precious few seconds, and, though
      he hadn't fully assessed his injuries, he knew his healing had begun.
      He was stunned by Stephen's sudden attack, but somehow, despite
      everything, his katana was in his right hand now -- his body didn't
      need his brain for that, not after four-hundred-plus years.
      
      Duncan licked his lips and stood, using the katana for support -- his
      left leg was useless.  Stephen was Immortal.  My God, STEPHEN WAS
      IMMORTAL!  When the hell did this happen?  And clearly, Stephen
      wasn't happy about it.  "Stephen," Duncan said softly, trying to calm
      the boy, reason with him.
      
      Stephen raised his pistol and started firing.
      
      Duncan dove on the bed and rolled off the far edge, another shot
      smashing into his left ankle. Dragging himself towards the back door
      beyond the bed, he reached up, turned the knob, and dropped his hand
      as Stephen fired again, another spray of bullets spattering the door.
      
      Duncan nudged the door open and slithered out like a worm, careful of
      the katana's razor edge -- it wouldn't do to slice something valuable
      off while trying to escape from a bullet.  There was obviously no
      reasoning with Stephen, and Duncan couldn't stay trapped here in this
      tiny space, because Stephen clearly meant to do what he'd said.
      
      Duncan could hear Stephen gasping now, almost as if in pain himself,
      inside the barge. Then there was the sound of a body bumping into a
      solid object, a grunted curse, a thump as Stephen obviously tripped
      over the bed in his haste to reach Duncan.  But Duncan had won his
      way out and was now lying prone on the deck, the cabin wall at his
      left elbow.  He crawled straight ahead as fast as he could despite
      his injuries, toward the port side of the barge.  He panted with
      effort and pain, leaving a trail of blood and sweat on his pristine
      deck.
      
      Somehow, he was going to have to end this here on the barge,
      overpower Stephen, talk some sense into him, get the boy calmed down,
      get him to see reason.  Duncan couldn't run away into the streets of
      Paris, not with Stephen wildly shooting at anything that moved.  God
      only knew who he'd kill.  Fortunately, Stephen was using a silencer
      -- he had to have thought this out!  Duncan had to end this right now!
      
      Duncan could hear Stephen inside the cabin getting back to his feet,
      cursing, running towards the back door.
      
      Hastily, Duncan crawled -- the healing not quite complete, but almost
      -- aiming now to make a half-circle to his right towards the prow of
      the barge, seeking the relative safety of the engine housing.  It
      would shield him and deflect bullets.  Maybe, if Duncan was lucky,
      one of Stephen's bullets would ricochet off the thick metal housing
      and kill Stephen, giving them both a little time.  Come to think of
      it, that would be good luck for Stephen, too, Duncan thought.
      
      By the time Stephen made it out of the cabin and out onto the deck,
      Duncan was hidden behind the engine housing, safe for the moment,
      hiding.  He needed time to heal -- in his present condition, he
      wouldn't be able to overpower the boy, which was what he had to do to
      save him   maybe to save them both.
      
      Stephen was still breathing heavily.  "I thought you liked to face
      your enemies, MacLeod," he taunted.
      
      "When they're fighting honorably, I do," Duncan returned.
      
      "You don't know anything about honor!" Stephen shouted.  "If you had,
      you wouldn't have let my father die!"
      
      Duncan sighed.  Not again, after all these years.  "Stephen, I
      thought you understood about your father."
      
      "I understood all right!  I understand that you let him die, and you
      promised me --"
      
      "Stephen!  I never promised--"
      
      "You promised me!  And then you stood there and watched him die!  And
      I had to watch, too!  And then you took Ordway's head, when it didn't
      matter any more, when Father was already DEAD!  I hate you!  I hate
      you!"  The last words were almost shrieked, as Stephen's voice became
      increasingly shrill through the tirade.
      
      Duncan said nothing, trying to heal, trying to think.  The death of
      Stephen's father was always going to stand between them.  There was
      no way around it.  Duncan took a deep breath.  Immortal feuds lasting
      centuries were born from grievances just like this.  For the first
      time, Duncan realized, admitted, that he might actually have to kill
      Stephen.  BEHEAD him.  DECAPITATE him.  He shook his head in denial
      -- no, not now, surely not now -- maybe, sometime in the distant
      future, when Stephen had learned what being an Immortal really meant,
      and only if Duncan had no choice
      
      "And you're not the only one I hate," Stephen said into the dark,
      silent moment.  "And you're not the only one who lied to me.  I'm
      going to get even with you for Papa, but I'm also going to get even
      with all of you for lying to me."
      
      Now Duncan was wholly at a loss.  "What lies?"
      
      That set Stephen off once more.  Shrill and hysterical again, he
      cried out, "You know what lies!  You never told me I was going to be
      Immortal!  Nobody told me, and you all knew.  Every single one of you
      knew  -- you, your *kinsman*" -- Stephen's voice dripped with
      contempt -- "Richie, Emma, and that tall dude with the big nose.
      Even Nate knew," he said, his voice wavering.  "See, I haven't
      forgotten any of you -- especially not Elena."  Stephen's voice
      dropped to a whisper.  "You all lied to me, and Elena was the worst
      of all.  She dared to call herself my mother and the rotten bitch
      couldn't even tell me the simple truth about myself.  So I'm going to
      kill you all, and I'm going to kill her, too -- I'm going to make you
      all suffer, just like I've suffered."
      
      Duncan shook his head.  If Stephen thought that he was going to kill
      all of those experienced Immortals, then the kid was crazy AND
      stupid.  "Stephen, you can't mean that.  Would you have wanted to
      know?  And do you really want to kill all those people?  You'll never
      --"
      
      "Since when did what I want ever matter a damn to anybody?" Stephen
      interrupted. "And isn't killing what Immortality is all about?  Hey,
      you know what your problem is, MacLeod? You think you know
      everything.  But you don't, and I'm going to kill you and then I'm
      going to kill everyone you love, just like I've lost everyone I
      loved, because I hate you all but I hate you most of all!"
      
      Duncan still couldn't believe that Stephen meant any of this -- he
      knew the boy was distraught -- but after he calmed down, he'd see,
      he'd understand.  Right now, it was Duncan's job to calm him down,
      give him that time to see and understand.  And now Duncan could,
      because finally all of his wounds had healed.
      
      So when Stephen dived across the engine block, Duncan was prepared
      for the boy to do something just that desperate, and he easily rolled
      away.  He was up instantly, the katana down, but ready.
      
      Stephen jumped to his feet, too, and the two men stood looking at one
      another in the lights from the city, one tall and broad, the other
      short and slim.  Stephen's face was in shadow, but he was still
      holding his gun -- Duncan could see the light glinting from it.
      
      "Stephen," Duncan said calmly.  "Listen to me.  I know you're upset.
      I know how you feel.  Becoming an Immortal is a shock.  I've been
      there."
      
      Stephen shook his head and hissed.
      
      Determined, Duncan went on.  "But I can't believe you really want to
      kill me and   everyone   and especially Elena.  She loves you, and
      you love her.  That's why I know you don't mean it, Stephen."
      
      Stephen raised his gun.  "That's your other problem, MacLeod.  You
      just don't listen.  Your kinsman is already on his way here, because
      I called him earlier tonight.  When he gets here, you're going to be
      dead."
      
      Duncan stared.  Connor   on his way here?  The blinking message
      light!  Oh, God, if Stephen wasn't lying, Connor must have called to
      warn him   and he would be on his way, just like Stephen said!
      
      "He can cry over you like I cried over my father.  But he won't catch
      me now   you know where I'm gonna be?  Ar-gen-tina!" he enunciated
      slowly, then Stephen fired, point-blank, and Duncan, still
      disbelieving, went down on the deck, again. The bullet lodged in his
      chest, squeezing out his supply of oxygen, making it almost
      impossible for him to breathe.  And making him realize, finally, that
      Stephen really did mean to kill all the Immortals he knew.  And deep
      down Duncan had known it all along, hadn't he?  Hadn't he?
      
      Stephen pointed the gun at Duncan's supine body.  "First you   and
      then Elena, since I know where to find her.  Then the others.  And
      you know what, MacLeod?  You know why it'll be so easy to kill Elena?
      Because she'll never believe it.  And even when the sword slices into
      her neck, she still won't believe it.  Just like you."
      
      Stephen kicked Duncan's right hand, kicked the katana free.
      
      Angry and betrayed, Duncan thought, no, not just like me -- I believe
      you.  He wanted to say, "I've loved you, boy, as best as I could."
      Instead he said, he ordered, "You won't kill Elena."  As Duncan
      watched Stephen raise the katana awkwardly and start it down in its
      deadly arc, Stephen's words exploded in Duncan's brain the way the
      bullets had exploded into his body: "It'll be so easy to kill Elena
      She'll never believe it  "  And after that
      
      Taking the deepest breath he could, Duncan rolled aside, and felt the
      wind of the blade's passage just millimeters from the back of his
      head.  He rolled back and kicked Stephen's feet out from under him.
      The boy went down gracelessly and lost the sword when he fell.
      
      Duncan leapt to his feet, stepped over the boy's body, and scooped up
      the katana.
      
      Stephen rolled over, and Duncan held the blade over him, in easy
      swinging distance from the boy's neck.  Duncan knew he was going to
      pass out soon.  He had to do something, say something, now.  He had
      to   he had to kill Stephen Holz    permanently.  Let's try that.
      "Do you want to die?" Duncan asked, his voice harsh and breathless.
      
      Stephen stared up at him, his face now lit in the city lights.  The
      exotic beauty was gone, replaced by a mask of hatred and fury.
      
      "Not until you've all paid!" Stephen shouted, bringing up the pistol
      that he'd never dropped and aiming for Duncan's head. Duncan went
      down to one knee and swung the blade in the same instant that Stephen
      jerked the pistol down and fired.
      
      Stephen's head rolled away from his body just as Stephen's bullet hit
      Duncan in the forehead.  Duncan fell across Stephen's headless body,
      thinking, My God, I really killed him!  What will I tell Elena?  But
      by the time Stephen's Quickening came, Duncan was already dead.
      
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